Sunday, July 10, 2011

A Bad Idea



McBride falls 12 stories, hitting the pavement like a Hefty bag filled with vegetable soup. He’s surprised it was so ordinary, had expected more drama, like in the cinema. Shocked crowds gathering, police cars, an ambulance, fire truck. Instead there’s only the homeless man from the alley between the two apartment buildings who comes to see, reaches first for the cheap wristwatch, then checks both pockets for a wallet. There’s not enough there for a bowl of soup. He takes the watch and scurries away. McBride feels guilty. Poor bugger. Maybe this wasn’t such a good idea. If a man falls from a building and there’s no one there to see, does it make a sound?

2 comments:

CJGallegos said...

Great, creepy, and of course incredible perspective. You couldn't have picked a better illustration.

smartz said...

Thank you. This is why I MUST keep writing with the group. You all inspire me so much.